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garysgirl
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0 posted 2004-03-09 10:53 AM


"I love you, my Baby", we often say
to each other
Mostly on the phone, though in person
we had much rather
It is hard to be apart when together
is so much better
With our hearts so entwined we are
destined to be together

In our lives there seems to be
such complications
But on all of these we will
serve notification
To each other, no way will we lose
our dedication
With each other we will be for
our lives duration

As we have to leave each other and tears
fill our eyes
More and more it is simple for us to
fully realize
That this awful pain we feel will
not completely subside
Until in the same home together
we will with each other reside

ONE DAY, MY LOVE, ONE DAY


© Copyright 2004 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-09 11:01 AM


Ethel, your longing ~ and love ~ cries right off the page and into my heart. May the day that you two lovebirds build a nest together come very soon...

Loving hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2004-03-09 11:04 AM


Hello, sweet lady.  
Thank you for your understanding.
I hope that you are feeling well
and getting your strength back.
With love and hugs,  
Ethel

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3 posted 2004-03-09 11:11 AM


garysgirl
One day I'm sure, loved the write.

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-03-09 11:26 AM


Dear Ethel, may this dream manifest quickly as it is clear through your beautiful longing words, that you are destined to each other.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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5 posted 2004-03-09 11:36 AM


Seymour, thank you for your encouragement.
.
.
Thank you, Margherita, for being there.
.
.
I appreciate both of you very much.
Heart hugs to you both,  
Ethel

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6 posted 2004-03-09 11:50 AM


For sure, one day soon, Ethel.  You and Gary will be together.

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl
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7 posted 2004-03-09 11:52 AM


Thanks, Scorpio. I really
do appreciate that.
Hugs  
Ethel

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8 posted 2004-03-09 11:56 AM


Ethel soon one day will turn into reality every day.  I wish for you that it comes soon.
Hugs.

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9 posted 2004-03-09 12:14 PM


Thank you, sweet Donna. I do too....
Hugs  
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-03-09 12:16 PM


Hang in there Ethel...
So much love can only lead to gentle resolutions.

Enjoyed,
TD

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11 posted 2004-03-09 12:18 PM


keep the faith, as i know you will
HopeS
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12 posted 2004-03-09 12:30 PM


Two hearts so lovingly longing, I hope your wishes and dreams come true for both of you
Hope

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13 posted 2004-03-09 12:32 PM


it's nice to read of such strong love


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14 posted 2004-03-09 12:46 PM


Awww Ethel, I wish there was something I could do or say to make you feel better. You and Gary deserve each and every happiness the world has to offer. hugs, Chris
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15 posted 2004-03-09 12:52 PM


Kathleen, Michelle, Hope, Dixie, Chris.....
Ya'll are all so sweet. Gary and I both
appreciate each one of you so very much.
Thank you all.
With love and heart hugs to each of you,
Ethel

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16 posted 2004-03-09 01:47 PM


One day for sure.......hope that day will come soon.


Charisma

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17 posted 2004-03-09 03:52 PM


This is sweet Ethel and yes keep the faith.



M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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18 posted 2004-03-09 04:00 PM


Ethel...soon you and Gary will be together for all eternity.
You just have to believe!
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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19 posted 2004-03-09 04:18 PM


I read this and realize you two are already together...living apart maybe...but together with divine love.....heart hugssss good to see you posting again!

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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20 posted 2004-03-09 04:33 PM


a very well done yearning aching poem - it drips with the emotion you feel - Paul
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21 posted 2004-03-09 04:38 PM


enjoyed
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22 posted 2004-03-09 04:57 PM


Ethel,

I loved this piece soooo much...
It reminds me a lot my
relationship with the man I love.

~Kelly~

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23 posted 2004-03-09 05:02 PM


You pour your heart out... God bless you! Grover.
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24 posted 2004-03-09 08:33 PM


oh the ache of love..i feel it here!

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25 posted 2004-03-09 09:43 PM


Charisma, Maree, Nancy Lee, Lauren, Paul,
Vandana, Kelly, Grover, Dawn.......
WOW!! What an outpouring of love and understanding
from all of my family of friends. All of you
are so wonderful. I appreciate each of you from
the depths of my heart. Thank you all so very much!!
Heart hugs and love to each of you,  

Ethel

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26 posted 2004-03-10 08:27 AM


"In our lives there seems to be
such complications
But on all of these we will
serve notification
To each other, no way will we lose
our dedication
With each other we will be for
our lives duration"


~ This stanza stood out to me. I could really see the meaning. enjoyed!

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27 posted 2004-03-10 10:56 PM


Thank you, Opeth. I'm glad that you enjoyed
reading it, and understood what I was saying.
Hugs  
Ethel

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28 posted 2004-03-10 11:33 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Ethel, I understand just how you feel, dearest friend, I have never even gotten to hold a girl's hand yet and now I'm hoping moving to Portland there I can find a special girl and become best of friends with her and get to feel the beauty of friendship's love, but until then the ache is difficult to endure! (sigh) I know with all my heart Gary will finally fill the nest in your heart without ever having to leave again real soon, in fact he already lives there and you're destined for each other, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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29 posted 2004-03-11 12:34 PM


Ethel,
  I read this earlier, but couldn't post then.  I'm glad this came around again.  The second time through, it was just as meaningful and touching as the first.  The longing...the patience...
  Take care.  You are a gem to us.

                 Sadie

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30 posted 2004-03-11 11:21 AM


Noah, you are so understanding. Thank you
for that and for reading.  
.
.
Sadie, thank you so much for reading again,
and for saying such nice things. I
really do appreciate it.
.
.
Heart hugs to you both,  
Ethel

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31 posted 2004-03-15 01:22 AM


Ethel -- such a heartfelt, beautiful poem.  By the way, your new website is really beautiful!   .........jo
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