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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-03-09 09:56 AM


Breeze through trees blow softly by,
the old familiar feel revisiting.
Heart rests, moment of refuge.
Enraptured warmth, mesmerizing lullaby
transcending self past empty, alone spaces.

  I CRY inside.

Ancient whispers had refrained from ears hear
sounds evident but I...
      I  no longer listened;
intent on drowning by surrounding
sounds of commotion....

Stumbling through darkness
distant howls, this stillness of night.
Rising mists, echoes seek.

Humbly I thank the Great Spirit
for elder voices carried on wind,
      lifting spirit above;
wisdoms callings heard
once again....




{We can make it through the storms and the winds of change
Though I walk through the valley of darkness I am not afraid
Cause I know I'm not alone
On this lonely road of faith.
Kid Rock}


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1 posted 2004-03-09 09:59 AM


and to hear the calling, to follow their echo, will lead you home...

this is such a nice ~sound~ to read

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-03-09 09:59 AM


Gentle Spirit,
Enjoyed the walk through your thoughts.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-03-09 10:02 AM



It is so important to know that gravity exists;
otherwise, we   would      loose             connections
withrootedthoughts...

So it is time to listen to the winds again...
for even rooted trees
find time
to dance.

yes, I know...


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4 posted 2004-03-09 10:07 AM


GentlestSpirit~
In the power of listen we find the ancient voices in surround~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-03-09 10:12 AM


thanks everyone.  sometimes we all need a little leading home....

I dunno, it just feels like there is more to say but the arrival of those words seem to be stuck in transit somewhere. Go figure.

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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6 posted 2004-03-09 10:13 AM


This poem was like your name gentle...very nice read...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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7 posted 2004-03-09 10:31 AM


"Humbly I thank (your Gentle) Spirit" for your voice carries on wind...

Donna, your "wisdoms callings" are "heard once again" by this fan of your spirit writings.

Love & Spirit Light,
Linda

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8 posted 2004-03-09 12:58 PM


excellent! I love this!
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9 posted 2004-03-09 01:08 PM


Humbly I thank the Great Spirit
for elder voices carried on wind,
      lifting spirit above;
wisdoms callings heard
once again....


And, I hear the whispers of wisdom
from your heart, sweet Donna.....  
Hugs,  
Ethel


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