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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-03-09 05:44 AM



Alice in Transition


Even the air presses its force against my senses
giving me late night wake, as thoughts of you
and word exchanges make me mindful
of how little we understand.

It is rare that comparisons
will ever match the reassurance I feel
when within your touch, nor the fear
that reflects an Alice in transition.

Only time and presence can unmask
what has strung me along this far
and only warmth and tenderness
can release fear's hold.


M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-03-09 05:51 AM


I dont know if it helps much...
but the white rabbit showed me this really cool place ...if you ever want to go...im sure i could show you the way

Transistion is a very scary place to be...but...we are all here for you



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2 posted 2004-03-09 05:57 AM


This is a very nice wonderland M...i enjoyed reading...thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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3 posted 2004-03-09 06:03 AM


so true nakdthoughts , love the ending of this poem : )



-Wolf

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4 posted 2004-03-09 01:50 PM


M, may you have all the "warmth and tenderness" you so richly deserve...

Warm hugs,
EA

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