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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-03-08 09:29 PM



Tiny seconds ...
Thoughts flourish into the air
I searched for the grail ,
and found a beautiful emotion

Circles of lifeforce, eden is now
secret preface to a novel of the unconscious
a perspective truth .... floats to the top
passion , tears and the falling rain

a message kept below the surface of the earth
swaying with the currents
underground river of jewels
reach through the window of possibility
let the grip of fear disappear as you awaken

Invisible oceans bring us into one
so many separate little worlds
transfixed to the motions of time
setting the match on the bonfire
faces around the smoke , stones around the coals
resting with a smile upon your souls

JDWIII 2/08/2004

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1 posted 2004-03-08 09:58 PM


I sense that you have a healers heart and mind. Thank you, for sharing this beautiful write, aujussy wolf.
iliana
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2 posted 2004-03-09 02:20 AM


What an interesting poem this was!  
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3 posted 2004-03-09 03:18 AM


a gorgeous write here

ps-love the new pic

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4 posted 2004-03-09 04:37 AM


"Invisible oceans bring us into one
so many separate little worlds
transfixed to the motions of time
setting the match on the bonfire
faces around the smoke , stones around the coals
resting with a smile upon your souls"


~your wisdom flows here ~

and i agree with Dixie..your new pic is lovely.

Martie
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5 posted 2004-03-09 10:53 AM


Beautifully written!
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-03-09 11:34 AM


"I searched for the grail ,
and found a beautiful emotion"

~ Just one of the many impressive passages in this wonderful write!

Love & Light,
EA

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7 posted 2004-03-09 11:46 AM


Very creative use of words and phrasing. A insightful poem.

believe in what your heart feels...

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8 posted 2004-03-09 04:27 PM


this is so rich in colorful phrases and interesting word usages...methinks the wordsmith has sculpted a masterpiece today
aujussy wolf
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9 posted 2004-03-13 11:12 AM


Midnight ...ohhh a healers heart ..how nice
,you helped heal this healer with your kind reply : )

Iliana....i like that word too ...glad i could intrest your intrests

Passing Shads ....ohh my  , always happy to see your replys , and when the word gorgeous
is thrown in the mix weeee heeee thanks sweety

Muted .... ohh dear muted ...have a hug and a smile on me ...cutie : )

Earth A ....  pure emotion .....
p.s. have you ever read the divinci code

Scorpio ....so happy to be insightful to you too..... : )

Steaven ....... hahaaa wordsmith ..and masterpiece , i am speachless ... thanks S

.....THANKS AGAIN fellow pipsters, poets, writers, scribblers, scetchers,and moderators
for all the kick butt poems you all write , these awesome emotions and feelings we share ..so much grand passion here !!!!!



-Wolf

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