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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-03-08 03:22 PM



You sit opposite me watching as I write my thoughts

In my eyes that dream of nothing

In my uncertainty with the world I write
my dreams of nothing
that will become nothing
and achieve nothing

Why do I write

I desire nothing

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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1 posted 2004-03-08 03:26 PM


Even though you say alot about nothing-- you say alot in a few words! Grover.
DavePage
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2 posted 2004-03-08 03:53 PM


Thanks Grover

I seem to have hit a very happy phrase of mind today

The words question in a way whether in desiring nothing, you feel you need nothing, or in having nothing, you feel you can achieve nothing.

Dave

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