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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-08 08:43 AM



Just another day
where time blends
and the whereabout of tomorrow
shows no likelihood of being exposed.

Tightness again gripping,
making swallowing the future
a starving proposition,
though hunger pains
remind me that
I still am.

M

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-08 08:45 AM


Maureen,
Good write, enjoyed.

muted
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2 posted 2004-03-08 09:48 PM


yes, you are
~Still~
but, when the time comes
you'll fly my friend

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-03-08 11:09 PM


I agree with muted



-Wolf

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-09 01:42 AM


Oh, Maureen, tomorrow will come and perhaps, with it, a kinder day.  Take care.   .....jo
Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-03-09 05:23 AM


The sun will always shine on the beautiful and compassionate...the sun will always shine on you M...nice poem...thank you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-03-09 12:25 PM


though hunger pains
remind me that
I still am.

good to stay hungry isn't it?
spring will come soon, imagaine the hunger pains the branchs are feeling right about now

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-09 12:34 PM


expression well done...I relate to this
ctowen
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8 posted 2004-03-09 12:55 PM


And still ....
        there comes growth and reaching,
        with every kitchen sink thrown in to keep
        the stillness in balance.


              

             I WASH MY HANDS OF IT!!!   *S

Margherita
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9 posted 2004-03-09 06:19 PM


Blessed be the moment ... the Now.
Even if it is hunger reminding you of it.

Very good write.
Love, Margherita

vandana
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10 posted 2004-03-09 07:40 PM


enjoyed
Goodknight
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11 posted 2004-03-09 07:50 PM


yes you are! and this is a wonderful poem - Paul
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12 posted 2004-03-10 10:14 AM


yes you still are

good write M
bernie

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Startime55
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13 posted 2004-03-10 10:17 AM


Spring is in the air and will soon fill your soul with renewal then you will hunger no more...**hugs**

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