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Aerial Tramway |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Earth reaches into infinitely, wishing for tomorrows Like an oversized message in the hands of kindness Accuracy eddies on a white steed of substance Swirling off burning edges of night’s soon displaced mist Oh how ambitions and definitive, eyes come to life Calling back kisses from long sagely wives Escalating “the author” to tumble ideas Off the hum of yesterday’s afternoon feelings A rare moment drifting in, rinsing effects of ornate design From what had collapsed, now avid fomenting wine Like small bubbles of image, blending millions of colorful palettes Silent communiqué, reproducing poetic amphitheaters of atoms Framed kismet of morning, politely dribbles this lettering place Some natural sequential order, where devotion is laced Winding up a pause, recapturing the voice of moments Collecting new things from old, influencing couplets How agreeable morning sprawls across my table Aroma of eggs over easy feeding the hours of daylight Sun lutes sparkles like Divinity’s chandelier Annunciations of music, like unrolling observant pioneers From the stream of yesterday’s chronological ash Nature’s protégé from an earlier continual splash Drumming a harpsichord, shaping two tresses into one Like the authentic heart of life, consciously awakens There we are, walking on a multifaceted, simple path Someplace, in between A songbird resonates into morning’s optimistic cuisine Bout a woman, stumbling on the walkway of harmonic means Perhaps it was autumn, and her perky opportunity… Cupping us in the armchair of another golden-haired college |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ "Perhaps it was autumn, and her perky opportunity… Cupping us in the armchair of another golden-haired college" Perhaps  |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lee~ WONDERFUL!!  ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 wow~ |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good writing.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee, your use of language is always so rich. Your images have impact and your ponderings get me to thinking!  Love & Light, Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"From the stream of yesterday’s chronological ash Nature’s protégé from an earlier continual splash Drumming a harpsichord, shaping two tresses into one Like the authentic heart of life, consciously awakens" Loved it! You have such a unique style, Lee! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
LJ As usual I find your words too complex for me and work on a line by line basis. Dave I dont like today's advertising and they haven't ot it right, dissolving ideas to work out what they are doing. Everyone loveydubbie playing for the audience. Got there late, everyone was impressed, it failed and they are now celebrating with very small minds Such is fate but they follow idiots and remember nothing apart from insults Thank god it is over and can someone stop the piano player or make him play something modern and he needs a bath, very badly and by the way I dont walk on cracks in the pavement as the food is bad here The words are excellent the meaning is almost Oprah. dave |
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