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It’s In The Bag
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It’s In The Bag |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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It’s In The Bag tonight I finally figured it out the feeling I have when I am with you it is the same one I use to have on Halloween night when I poured out my bag and saw all the great things inside "i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A wonderful write, Helen... very creative *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now this gave me a big smile this morning!  Love it! Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Ohh yea this is what i call a breakthrough poem , awesome and very smart ...trick or treat? James |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The pure childlike joy of looking around from inside. I love this image! Thank you. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Bravo....What a wonderful way to look at it... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is just too sweet Helen! Both the images and the smiles you brought to mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's sweet! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good Helen...your bag must be magic.... Thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
you hit the mark, bullseye! so honest, i like it! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I thought this was going to be about one of your traffic stops?.....'It's in the bag"....yea, I've had cops ask me what's in my "bag" before....they have no sense of humor sometimes....but of course, you do...(and you have so much more too)...... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
*smiling* what a wonderful write...... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Helen. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
It must be very exciting to have that feeling. I enjoyed your lines, as always, Helen! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen -- what a comparison! Loved it!  ........jo |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Perfectly expressed I think! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Halloween night when I poured out my bag and saw all the great things inside You obviously take Halloween very seriously I'm still tipping the bag out but I get nothing like that Enjoyed this Dave |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
ahhhhh...the imagery of discovery...expertly captured |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As they say...like a kid in a candy store...James |
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