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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-08 05:15 AM


Peel away my mystery, make me transparent.
Find within the frightened child who has no flaws, only love and mind purity.

What are you looking for?
My life is not complex, it is filled with magical dreams, with colour,essence and beauty.

Modest, i am motivated by the happiness of others.
Selfless, keen to help you where you want to go.

Giving is what makes my life complete.
Take all that i own, all that i have.
Love in all of it's guises to you i will show.

My god given gift, is to bring beautiful pleasure to all who takes shelter within my golden love cloak, a treasure trove unimagined.

Showers of spring rain is natures purification, allow me to shower you, bathe you in rainbow colours.
My will to change your life for the better i am determined.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-03-08 09:14 AM


...*SIGH*...

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

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2 posted 2004-03-08 09:50 PM


it is a beautiful *gift* to have a heart so full

this is a lovely read

Kahlil
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3 posted 2004-03-08 10:21 PM


I like how you've worded your many offerings and it must be a delicious mystery for you, wondering what will appeal and to whom...

Having a "spreadsheet" type of brain myself, for too long, I am learning the importance Of
"magical dreams, with colour, essence and beauty".  Nice write.   ~K~

iliana
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4 posted 2004-03-09 01:54 AM


Goldenrose -- Now I would give this a high mark for deep devotion!
Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-03-09 05:09 AM


Nancy...thanks for the sigh..LOL...GR..

Dawn...beauty is in the eye of the beholder. it is easy to give beauty to one who IS beauty..thank you...Goldenrose.

Kahlil..thank you for your kind comments..i offer all of my magical dreams to everybody...dreaming is good for your inner being....GR....

Iliana..if you have given me a high mark...that is praise indeed ....thank you...GR..

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-03-09 01:57 PM


I have already soaked in a warm bubble bath this morning, but after reading your poem I have this uncontrollable urge to have a "shower"!

You have such a caring, giving and romantic soul.

Love & Light,
EA

Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2004-03-09 05:21 PM


Your heart unveiled .... beautiful sight.
Love, Margherita

Goldenrose
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8 posted 2004-03-10 05:23 AM


Linda..it would be my pleasure to shower you...and have my golden rays bathe you with colour...thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.


Margerhita...I always like to bare my heart to you at PIP..because i know it is in good hands..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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