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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-03-07 10:07 PM

Congenial Forevers

Look at me, as I look
At you,
In a most congenial way

Is this
Who you are?

(Do not ask the age
of innocence)

Change? Is simply concurrent with
Life’s give and takes…

If one cannot give,
And take,
With the flow

Then let it go.

Nothing stagnant,
Changes
Other than to die.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-03-07 10:22 PM

a theme close to my heart right now...thank you

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-03-07 10:53 PM

Very true Karilea. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2004-03-07 10:55 PM

Yes...so well put.
Oh, I really liked this.
TD

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-03-07 11:03 PM

Nodding in agreement here.
Hugs~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-03-07 11:07 PM

"Change? Is simply concurrent with
Life’s give and takes…

If one cannot give,
And take,
With the flow

Then let it go."

Lovely penning of great words of wisdom, Sunshine!

.......jo

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2004-03-07 11:11 PM

"Nothing stagnant,
Changes
Other than to die."

Great depth! Thank you for sharing it.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2004-03-08 12:04 PM

Karilea

So thoughtfilled and well done.

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

8 posted 2004-03-08 12:07 PM

Incredible wisdom is wrapped in your words...

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

9 posted 2004-03-08 01:16 PM

"If one cannot give,
And take,
With the flow

Then let it go."

Everytime I read this, I hear Johnnie Cochran's voice...

Good advice, poetically spoken Kari.

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

10 posted 2004-03-08 02:04 PM

Well worded piece. My favorite lines are the same as Duncan's. Excellent.
Thank you for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

11 posted 2004-03-08 02:09 PM

Splendiferous !!

yea its sunshine

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2004-03-08 03:32 PM

I agree too. Very wise advice Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

13 posted 2004-03-08 03:36 PM

Great! Grover.

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2004-03-08 03:56 PM

yes indeed....a wise word spoken...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 2004-03-08 08:24 PM

Wondermous Karilea and so very true.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

16 posted 2004-03-08 08:45 PM

enjoyed the sounds and wisdom of this.
You have such versality as a poetess.
Sadie

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