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Open Poetry #31

Precious Stitches

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2004-03-07 04:52 PM

Precious Stitches

She comes searching with eyes aglow filled with
curiosity.
Touching each line like a delicate flower that is
opening
to the dawn of a first kiss.
As she touches each expression she finds
precious stitches
of
gold and silver in every word.
These cherished words weaving an intricate tapestry
of
mystery and succulent pleasures.
She touches with perception each morsel the writer
does share.
Each line bringing life into view of packages
wrapped in brightly colored hues.
Maybe one line giving her the answer she
has been looking for all her life.
Another leading her down a path of tears and sorrow,
for the writer has touched her deep within her
searching soul.
Taste these visions with each touch, my friend.
Enjoy the world of poetry.

Love
Bon-Bon

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-03-07 05:08 PM

Such delicate and deep expressions.
Precious stitches sounds nice!
Love, Margherita

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-07 06:49 PM

Words of wisdom... enjoyed much! Grover.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-03-07 06:57 PM

oh, the power of words...

"Each line bringing life into view of packages
wrapped in brightly colored hues.
Maybe one line giving her the answer she
has been looking for all her life."

that immortal one line...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-03-07 08:20 PM

I agree..wonderful piece

Balladeer

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 2004-03-07 09:39 PM

Well said, Bonnie! Poetry is all this...and more.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-03-09 02:29 AM

Yes, so true, BonBon!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-03-09 05:00 AM

very nice!

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