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icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2004-03-07 02:35 PM

there is believing
between lines of want to be
there is awareness

there is denial
between anger and despair
there is surrender

there is becoming
between points of loss and grief
there is forgiveness

©2004 by icebox

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-03-07 02:44 PM

Box of Ice, you be a wise and knowing cartographer!

Light the way!

EA

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-03-07 02:45 PM

I'm keeping this, if you don't mind

I may even copy this to a big poster and hang it on my wall...along with the small post-it I will put on my bathroom mirror

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2004-03-07 03:01 PM

icebox

Now, it is I that feels humble.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-03-07 03:13 PM

Oh, Wise One, how true! I love how you captured just the right way to say it, and I'm keeping this, too. ~K~

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-07 03:16 PM

Contrasts are amazing! Grover.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2004-03-07 06:30 PM

No argument from me...

Nicely said!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-03-07 06:33 PM

icebox
All good points, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-03-07 06:36 PM

This is so well done..
and I do love the presentation.
Excellent.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

9 posted 2004-03-07 06:39 PM

Enjoyed the read

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

10 posted 2004-03-07 06:42 PM

wow...great write! Knew this one was going to be special when my browser only pulled up the first 2 lines and it exploded on my mind...wonderful!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

11 posted 2004-03-07 09:18 PM

yes

you are sooo right

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

12 posted 2004-03-07 11:08 PM

Thank you all for taking time to read this and for your kind comments. I appreciate it.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-04-10 02:34 PM

needed this again today

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2004-04-10 03:24 PM

Well, what can I say...I went to the icebox to find some morsel to eat, and I found a full meal! Great poem!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

15 posted 2004-04-11 08:23 PM

nice write

pictureme
Member

since 2003-11-28

Posts 248
Ohio, USA

16 posted 2004-04-11 11:49 PM

icebox,
there is love
between birth and death
there is living!
really enjoyed this one!
thanx,
pictureme

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