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choshi
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0 posted 2004-03-07 12:36 PM



Living;
this wide-awake dream called life
distant gull's cry-
as waves crash into foam,
memories too rise and fall.

© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-03-07 12:46 PM


Choshi -- what a brilliaint analogy!  Loved this one!   .......jo
choshi
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2 posted 2004-03-07 12:56 PM


Choshi -- what a brilliaint analogy!  Loved this one!

Awww, Thank you so much  Jo, and big   back   ~P

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3 posted 2004-03-07 03:37 AM


you KNOW
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2004-03-07 03:50 AM


Wonderful, Paul

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5 posted 2004-03-07 04:17 AM


Life's a beach
choshi
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6 posted 2004-03-07 06:12 AM


you KNOW

Big back....

choshi
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7 posted 2004-03-07 06:15 AM


Wonderful, Paul

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Thank you ~M,  deep appreciation... ~P

choshi
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8 posted 2004-03-07 06:17 AM


Life's a beach

In so many ways, Dixie...For me, beach images are strong,liquid and strike close to home....~P

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