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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
We wander here… A ceasing of overlap, yet close Synchronized in beat and beckon Of magnetic impulse…radiant, speaking Words take their own voices Tenderly to flesh and into bone Some majestic chasm still in descript Yet groping intrinsic lavish Moist on my emotions and mind Faint and thready, but endless still We wander here… Where hearts lay on the outside Exposed and gasping… coup in the connect Along a line that is too curved to see around Dreams deepen, enliven…throb Something here between us shared As you seek me, I remain For you explore In fondle of a love too large to be contained Spilling over the edges of unconditional and ever Elusive Copyright Kkh 3/6/04 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
SHEESH! enjoyed this one TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For you explore In fondle of a love too large to be contained Spilling over the edges of unconditional and ever now this is just beautiful... hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very sensual |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
TD If I didn't know better I would think you were talking about writing peotry. I had to read your words several times and then go through them line by line. It is a very complex piece of writing for me to understand but as I pieced together the meaning as I saw it, it felt good Dave |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautful and passionate. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KathleenKathleen~ 'Dreams deepen, enliven…throb Something here between us shared As you seek me, I remain' Oh my ... with these beautiful word-thoughts, I'd have to say your vision is 20/20~ BEAUTIFUL~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
For you explore In fondle of a love too large to be contained Spilling over the edges of unconditional and ever elusive That's the secret. Very beautiful. Love, Margherita  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awe-some and inspiring write! Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
wow...what a great write...this one was fabulous! Loved it all but this was special "Words take their own voices Tenderly to flesh and into bone Some majestic chasm still in descript" And, yes, they do...those words live lives of their own... |
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