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Tears. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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You say, “thou tears be a form of weakness” Be it not the purest of waters poured upon this earth? Doth thee admit never spilt a drop of emotion Or are thy emotionless no tears to spare Even those with no eyes cry in times of need Leafs fall from trees downwards to ground Shooting stars fall from the skies above I say, “thou tears be from all of us”. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This is very good! I really liked, "Even those with no eyes cry in times of need." Great poem! Grover. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Even those with no eyes cry in times of need" yes, the pivotal line  good thoughts here |
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