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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-03-06 03:21 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

Our hearts reflected off each other
As words blended into rhyme
We wrote of love in all its glory
So surreal, yet so divine

A kaleidoscope of color
Was cast across the deep blue sky
As we wrote in perfect harmony
Our words were given wings to fly

I saw an image of a princess
Waiting for her handsome knight
As you held my hand in guidance
I was drawn towards love's light

A pair of star crossed lovers
Came to life upon the page
Love was capsulised in an instant
And frozen in a by-gone age

I felt much joy and rapture
As our tale of love unfurled
I could not keep it to myself
I had to share it with the world

* * *

"We were two but had one heart"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-03-06 03:24 PM


Gosh Sue you write so beautifully of romance.
Another lovely for my library.
Thank you for this keeper.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

DavePage
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Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-03-06 03:49 PM


Sue

It is beautiful.

Dave

eor
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blues & greys
3 posted 2004-03-06 04:41 PM


the picture you posted is beautiful, is that what inspired you?  nice write

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-03-06 05:45 PM


Suetang
Lovely picture and lovely write.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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5 posted 2004-03-06 06:14 PM


Yes, isn't love grand! Grover.
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2004-03-07 03:23 PM


Thank you all for your lovely comments.

eor - I actually wrote the poem before I sought the picture.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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7 posted 2004-03-08 05:50 PM


Sue:  Very romantic and enjoyable!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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