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Open Poetry #31

Satisfaction

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2004-03-06 03:16 PM

A mind of engagement
intense

Probing
A feeling
wrestling

In a mire
Of sprawling

Ideas
Concepts

voracious
Demanding
Satisfaction

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

1 posted 2004-03-06 03:22 PM

Hi Dave

It's nice to see you back with us. I hope all is well with you.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-03-06 03:53 PM

Excellent!
Love, Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-03-06 03:57 PM

Well done Dave..much enjoyed.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-03-07 01:10 AM

I really like this.
Its great.
Welcome back.

:-)

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

5 posted 2004-03-07 01:29 AM

Dave,

every word is packed, then you unpack each with the next....strong...~P

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2004-03-07 03:51 AM

I like what Paul had to say...it was a well packed poem

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