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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-06 05:04 AM


Dark is the night, dark as my mood, inside thoughts take the shape of blackness.

My inner soul is plunged into the abyss, where no light reaches, a labyrinth of murkiness.

Echoing around my mind is sad doleful music.
Empty i am, no love is within me.

My future is unknown, my life is in the balence.
Lonelieness is the only way before me that i see.

Ghostly surreal voices haunt me, crying and wailing.
Rolling thunder, rushing wind, howling wolves calls, fill my head.

Hope is all that i have, hope for silence and my minds relief.
Down sweetly scented forests, with sun splintered light, is where i want to tread.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
1 posted 2004-03-06 05:28 AM


dont worry Phil, it will happen, just keep wishing for the light.
Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-03-06 05:35 AM


Dawn you are amazing...you are going through a bad time right now yourself and you can still offer support for me...it makes me care for you even more...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-03-06 07:34 AM


Ghostly surreal voices haunt me, crying and wailing.
Rolling thunder, rushing wind, howling wolves calls, fill my head.


drastic chnges in life do that to one..it is strange how I never even thought I would feel that way or that anything drastic would occur in my lifetime so early.

hugs
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4 posted 2004-03-06 07:38 AM


Goldenrose
It's all a stage just another page, enjoyed.

Goldenrose
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5 posted 2004-03-06 08:07 AM


Sometimes my bleakness just needs to be released Maureen..but i know it will return...from the shadows...it is something i just have to live with...thank you for your thoughts and words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-03-06 08:09 AM


Yes it is just another stage and another page..but sometimes the page is stained with inky blackness....but something will bring me out of it..if only temporarily...thank you for your words Seymour.....

Goldenrose.


''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-06 01:37 PM


cheer up GR
Suetang
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8 posted 2004-03-06 03:46 PM


Hello Phil

I have been to that dark place you speak of and I can only hope that your writing helps to guide you away from the darkness.  I know it did for me.

Here are a couple of quotes I'd like to share with you.

"When the willow bends at the
first hint of troubled breezes,
our friends come running
to see how they can help.
Sometimes our friends know
when they are needed
even before we realise it ourselves,
because we are accustomed to
letting them in on the
happenings of our lives"

"We are all angels with only one wing,
we can fly only by embracing each other"

Take care..........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goldenrose
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9 posted 2004-03-08 04:35 AM


Dixie..i always cheer up when you reply to me...one could not stay sad for too long with you around..Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Goldenrose
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10 posted 2004-03-08 04:36 AM


Sue thank you for your concern....and pearls of wisdom..very much appreciated....g'day to you..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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