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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-03-06 03:06 AM

"It's 'pea-soup' balmy out tonight!"
the weatherman engaged his smile.
"Yes," I thought. "Oh yes indeed"

hungry-hunger-been-awhile

I made electricity
crossing legs
and dotting "t"'s
brushing feathers
from my face
delighting
in the tingling
of my nails in skate of scalp...

blushing

just beneath.

A bead
of sweat
in birth of me
languid
icing my own neck
I can smell
the musk of self

thinking-of-you-as-I-write

beat-heart-beat
and hold-me-tight

reeling in the free.

~chimes~

a rhyme's malingering
luscious
lick-my-finger-pout
tonight
the breeze
feels like a shout

(to think I thought I'd do without)

~laughter~

singing spring.

muted

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since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-03-06 05:31 AM

oh this is sultry...ah, those balmy nights, indoors and out!
loved this

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-03-06 08:08 AM

Well, send it up here...we're still nipping our noses with frosty thoughts of roses...it's 33 degrees!

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-03-06 08:34 AM

serenity,
     You amaze me!  Where on earth do you come up with all this imagery for one poem?
I'm envious!!!   Have a great weekend!
               Sadie

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-03-06 09:33 AM

It's 'pea-soup' balmy out tonight!"
the weatherman engaged his smile.
"Yes," I thought. "Oh yes indeed"

ooooh ya!! Love those balmy thoughts of yours Karen. Reminds me of ummmm...oh, what was that movie?..... Summer and Smoke? I think that's it. Only this is Springtime and Sizzle.

hugs to you, Chris

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-03-06 09:42 AM

Yup..what my sister said...
You sizzle in the spring Karen.
Excellent upbeat write.
Love ya lady~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-03-06 10:06 AM

serenity,
For whom the bells toll. LOL

Martie

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California

7 posted 2004-03-06 10:28 AM

serenity

Taken there with your remarkable words.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

8 posted 2004-03-07 06:42 PM

Seems a bit humid. Steamy, some would say.

Almost missed this'n

Ahhhh, Spring. Ain't it grand...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-03-10 06:55 AM

tonight
the breeze
feels like a shout

Indeed it does! Fantastic K....absolutely.

M

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2004-03-10 10:09 AM

singing spring indeed.......thank you so much for sharing your wonderful thoughts

Charisma

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

11 posted 2004-03-10 10:12 AM

*grin*...What wonderfully descriptive words you write...A joy to read...

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2004-03-10 06:45 PM

you know me baby..Im moth giddy for that bayou humidity.

LOVE the imagery and word play in this girlie.

Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything
Wash my heart out on the stones ... and I'm almost gone.

David Gray

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

13 posted 2004-03-10 07:55 PM

I could use some of that
'be balmy' stuff today
LOL, enjoyed the temp change reading this

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2004-03-10 11:30 PM

definitely sultry
and filled with drama
very you

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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15 posted 2004-03-11 10:29 PM

Liked it

Nice

dave

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

16 posted 2004-03-11 10:55 PM

well I will be honest....I miss the south, and this spring song just makes me ache to return .... lovely this....and such vivid images came to mind....thank ya

~~**~~
Walking with bare feet
among a tapestry of words,
each woven thread, awakening the soul
~~**~~

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

17 posted 2004-03-11 11:08 PM

thank you

I think i'll just hum the tune tonight tho....

yer all so lovely for reading.

(and it felt like that--it really did.

)

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

18 posted 2004-03-12 04:02 PM

I will have some of what she is having!!!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

19 posted 2004-03-13 02:15 PM

looking for my
lost shaker of salt

some people claim that theres a ...

oh damn

you know what I mean...

:smooch:

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