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sediments of the mind
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sediments of the mind |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the sullen change of ire-dredged straits in fallow, felt-like ranks of creek-dead rows dismiss the rivulets of life-borne nectar rich and curse the cause of spring’s debut like sediments of mind so loosely layered in soul-strained strata lade with lodes of ethos filled with granules of decaying order set adrift in canyons of memory carved by passing time flowing revenues of silt-lined pockets soft stuffed with sand of soul and fresh with life anew |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Strong vocab and imagery filled with "multiple layers" to consider... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed this immensely |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice images, enjoyed much! Grover. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
This is one of the best poems...(it is true poetry).....that I have seen here. In fact I went away for quite awhile because I got so thirsty. This is a long drink. Thank you Robert |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have illustrated in a way that I have not read before...new and fresh. The language is full and throaty... I like this Steven. Great write. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Steaven...very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A complex piece that fits the title, which is well chosen... I like this...flows nicely "like sediments of mind so loosely layered in soul-strained strata lade with lodes of ethos" enjoyed _________ice ><> |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I like this too, it's one to ponder. |
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