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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2004-03-05 04:41 PM

Tell me exactly where
The scream inside goes
When you in open mouthed face of wind
Hear only the weak sob
And pick shattered pieces off broken limb
To try and put it all back together

Again

Or where it is inside
One finds enough solid substance to stand
When black born sting of hail
Leaves the layers slick and thin
And you know
Someone on you

Depends

It again depends

Stubborn courage or ill formed will
That does not allow give of ground
But leaves holes inside

All and all

Still

This empty of me to self-sorrow

Will all be better

Tomorrow?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-03-05 04:46 PM

c'mere, for your morning hug, oh gnarly one
LOL, sending sweet melodies in the wind to you

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-03-05 04:57 PM

Excellent Captain...
Very high winds here today...
went for a walk
down by the water..
tears dried as fast as they fell.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2004-03-05 04:59 PM

It will be better, O friend... Hope is the only hope sometimes...

nicely penned...

regards
sudhir

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2004-03-05 05:04 PM

Ron

Thank you for this!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-03-05 08:36 PM

library click thing!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2004-03-05 08:41 PM

I recall an April long ago, dead of
night...these feelings...

maybe it wasn't
so long ago...

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-03-05 09:45 PM

"Stubborn courage or ill formed will
That does not allow give of ground
But leaves holes inside"

Have you been peaking inside my head?
This poem was excellent. I love the way you began it with the setting you chose. I could feel the open-mouthed screams against the galing wind. It just got better and better from there! Incredible title, too.
Sadie

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-03-06 12:54 PM

Sudhir said it best...so I'll ditto him

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2004-03-07 10:06 PM

Tell me exactly where
The scream inside goes
When you in open mouthed face of wind
Hear only the weak sob
And pick shattered pieces off broken limb
To try and put it all back together '''

~~
understanding this.....heres to better days hugssss

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2004-03-11 12:54 PM

Tell me exactly where
The scream inside goes
When you in open mouthed face of wind
Hear only the weak sob
And pick shattered pieces off broken limb
To try and put it all back together

Again

You write with so much finesse....
Really liked that verse up there Cpat.
Had me thinking that once I get it put back
together, can I keep it together!!

Probably not!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-03-11 03:36 AM

wow...really wow

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