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IndigoEve
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Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2004-03-05 04:29 PM


These words she will never understand,
The words that will never understand her
Spill forth from tongue into ashen hands
Hands fall onto ashen tongue, bereaved
Misconstrued simulacrum painted with the air
Air staining images of erroneous forever
Sighs mixed in loneliness are everything that she hears
She is all she has heard like forlornly mingled soughs  

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-05 05:49 PM


"Sighs mixed in loneliness are everything that she hears"

sighs resembling the real thing
but only in memory?

enjoyed the write

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Michigan
2 posted 2004-03-05 09:00 PM


Interesting writing ,good sting to it
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3 posted 2004-03-05 09:08 PM


You made me reach...
and that is good!
And once I knew?
I smiled.

Well done!

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