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Open Poetry #31

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

0 posted 2004-03-05 12:26 PM

A
cold
blood-raw
stone of death,
chiseled blade of
hunter's strength,
binds the wounded
prey to lonesome
fate, set to
nature’s way

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-03-05 12:28 PM

Excellent Steaven!
I'm sure Sunshine will love this as much as I do.
Great presentation as well.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-03-05 12:29 PM

Absolutely Stunning in its feel and effect..Powerful writing...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-03-05 01:09 PM

Awesome write steavenr. Enjoyed. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-03-05 01:49 PM

Steven! You did it! And beautifully done!
It is raw, and true, and very, very good!

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