Open Poetry #31 |
Nothing's Gonna Change My Mind |
ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
These kids aren't related so I don't think I'm pushing the envelope too much??? Nothing's Gonna Change My Mind We got to know each other by fortune my father her mother and fate they were older lovers wanting marriage we were thrown together that way and I got to know her gentle beauty cause I got to see her everyday and though she was my stepsister I knew I'd never be the same So I told her what I was thinkin and she stared at me deep and dark her wide eyes circled by her golden hair gave a look that thrilled my heart chorus: "Do you think that I'm crazy Sherry Do you think that I'm outa line cause I fell in love with you Sherry and nothin's gonna change my mind" she walked away from me slowly but she looked back from the stairway gave me a quick grin and crossed her arms I thought my beatin heart would break And I froze as she kept lookin at me The air became solemn as a wake I said "I know we ain't kin and this ain't a sin" Lord she never had a thing to say. chorus: "Do you think that I'm crazy Sherry Do you think that I'm outa line cause I fell in love with you Sherry and nothin's gonna change my mind" well we finally got round to talkin she took my hand and told me she knew she had studied my eyes when she passed close by they'd given her more than a clue said she shared a fire with a college mate and she got scorched by the flame but he'd run off and left her weak and she needed time to kill the pain chorus: "Do you think that I'm crazy Sherry Do you think that I'm outa line cause I fell in love with you Sherry and nothin's gonna change my mind" Ain't doin nothin at all Just answerin the call Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ethome A beautiful song. Enjoyed |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This is simply lovely. How sweet, you weren't pushing the envolope in any way. This was such a wonderful read. Well done!! ^*~Kimberley~*^ "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and nothins gonna change the facts you are a first rate storyteller |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What Kacy said, Ethome... what Kacy said. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
can't help who you fall in love with good song here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Lord she never had a thing to say. I'm not quite sure why this line struck me so... unless it's because silence never hurts more than when it follows a declaration of love. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ahhhhhhh...so very good to feel the beauty of your words again...they make the heart sing with romance.... |
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