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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-04 07:09 PM



Jericho


I am not
a trusting soul
my past has
taught me that
and I question
much more
than I ever
need to
not too good
at leaving
the gate open
better at pushing
than pulling
but yesterday
when I looked
in your eyes
I saw something
and you
became Jericho
and all the walls
came tumbling down


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2004-03-04 10:28 PM


The power of love is amazing...just like this poem...

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2004-03-04 11:55 PM


NIce writing...James
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-03-05 03:32 AM


I know the feeling

*big smile for you*

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-03-05 06:39 AM


I like your gentle poetry..it echo's in my mind...

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Kicking Kim
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5 posted 2004-03-05 07:02 AM


Wow.  You are so insightful and your poetry comes straight from the heart.  This was a wonderful read, yet again.  Keep at it!!

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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6 posted 2004-03-05 07:37 AM


It's quite an experience when your gaurd falls down.....However, many of us have to learn that all over again....I really enjoyed the read.

Eric

jellybeans
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7 posted 2004-03-05 09:27 AM


this is beautiful....really enjoyed this...its good to know when the walls need to tumble and when they need reinforced
scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2004-03-05 09:32 AM


To trust and love again is gift Helen.  Well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

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