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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-04 01:15 PM



I Promise


today and
tomorrow
to be
your best friend
good and bad
the one
on whom
you can depend
when others
let you down
I promise
you this
there will
be one
by your side
as long as
I exist



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-03-04 01:29 PM


Enjoyed this nice poem! Grover.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2004-03-04 01:53 PM


OneSlick~
And knowing you ... I know this is a promise ... and not just a poem~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Startime55
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3 posted 2004-03-04 02:02 PM


A romatically beautiful promise from the heart...wonderful..

aujussy wolf
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4 posted 2004-03-05 01:43 AM


a good hearted peom , compassionate write ... angelical : )

jw

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5 posted 2004-03-05 01:46 AM


opps i ment poem , lol
passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-03-05 03:33 AM


you are loved
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2004-03-05 06:37 AM


Very nice..very gentle...very good poetry..

Thank you...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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