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When Was It My Turn To Know
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When Was It My Turn To Know |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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When Was It My Turn To Know I often wonder why my mind Gets caught up in this mess Many things I wanted to say Still I was unable to express It begins causing frustration In fact niggling and agitating Thoughts heaped in this pile All were silently kept waiting The thoughts cross the mind Still they refuse to come out Something holds them back As confusion circles in doubt My mind examines the facts Whilst I analysed the details I realised all of my confusion Is when my reaching you fails Upon every nook and cranny Emotions are sent to and fro Had I remained on your mind When was it my turn to know Hope©2004 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope your poem reflects so perfectly well what goes on in your mind and heart. Love, hugs and … peace, dear one. Margherita  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
thank you Margherita for your kind understanding reply ... yes someone always on my mind and in my heart , but their silence causes confusion Hope |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sigh...silence can cause such pain and that pain is clearly reflected here....**hugs** I hope your turn to know comes soon... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Karen I have missed you , thank you for your caring reply ,awaiting my turn , yes but my patience is wearing thin Hope |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
This warm-hearted poem flows so very smoothly. Enjoyed! Grover. |
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