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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-04 06:00 AM

Realization

No longer needed,
in silent message,
one, I have finally received.

Eyes tired of searching for reasons,
heart worn thin, emotions disintegrating,
unmasked and unable
to heal the pain of loss.

Carrying the wait upon shoulders
heavy with care, turning up the music
loud enough to drown out thoughts
that follow my footsteps trying to catch up
and reside where the darkness embraces.

Last chance days
when it reigns tears of forgetting,
to leave behind unanswered questions,
knowing that only I
read between the lines of broken trust
and march into Spring alone,
as always.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2004-03-04 06:40 AM

Sad Maureen...but you are telling your heart..as it is now..hope things turn brighter soon...

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-03-04 06:40 AM

Dear Mauren, what a powerful, beautiful write!
This touches me deeply.
Love and hugs. Margherita

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

3 posted 2004-03-04 06:46 AM

Wow , this touched me more than you know Maureen , for I too have been searching reasons of unanswered questions.... in fact just been trying to write about it too

Hope

EternitysHorizon
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 145
Twilight's Orchestra

4 posted 2004-03-05 12:19 PM

no burden close in weight
emotions ever stretching
literal botomless bag

you write it well

"High on the Mountain, where the Sun stil Shines, and the water runs a little lazy."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-03-05 03:34 AM

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2004-03-06 03:58 PM

Hello Maureen

Your words almost broke my heart. You deserve so much love and happiness my friend.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

7 posted 2004-03-06 04:05 PM

Sad thoughts written from I think, a very delicate heart.

Hugs,
Deb

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

8 posted 2004-03-06 04:43 PM

beautiful

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2004-03-06 04:57 PM

This really aches Maureen...
things will turn around soon...have faith.
Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-03-06 06:47 PM

Maureen, this is a great poem! I pray for good things to happen for you! Grover.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2004-03-06 07:24 PM

Even in the saddest of your works Maureen, there is a grace and light that always dawns, and I always come away from the read deeper and more thoughtful.
Hugs,
TD

sea_of_okc
Senior Member

since 1999-06-15

Posts 568
Oklahoma City, OK, USA

12 posted 2004-03-06 08:01 PM

This is so sad it brought tears to my eyes...
I'd give ya a real hug but this will hafta do...

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