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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-03-04 05:19 AM


Where the pale blue moon meets the mountains, i will will be watching, with eyes burning.

My lungs breathe the wild night air, into your heart like a shadow, i will enter while you are dreaming.

Run with me through the dark forest, under the myriad of stars that flame with glittering ryme.

Together we will wander, breathing the essence, pulse to pulse, eternal spirits, without time.

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1 posted 2004-03-04 05:23 AM


you are a busy one today!!
thats good, because i love to read

a couple of lines that stood out most:

"i will enter while you are dreaming."
"eternal spirits, without time."

im a firm believer in dreaming magick...its a place where all things are possible.

another good write from you


Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-03-04 05:28 AM


Now my day is complete Muted...three out of Three...i could be very busy as long as you reply to my poetry...
Glad you like to read and reply....

Will be looking for your poems....cannot wait to reply....

Thank you once AGAIN..LOL..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-03-04 06:47 AM


I love your wolf theme poems!
You paint very impressive images here.
Love, Margherita

Goldenrose
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4 posted 2004-03-04 06:50 AM


Thank you Margherita....your reply makes my writing them worthy of their time..you are so very kind....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-03-04 07:04 AM






Wolf howling
to the moon
piercing your
very core
you feel
mystery’s touch
and wonder
about the bond
that ties you
to All there is ….


Love, Margherita

ice
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6 posted 2004-03-04 07:15 AM


The wolf, to me symbolizes wilderness..the heart being one of the last strongholds of that entity....Very good use of the theme word here, passion makes the blood flow, like a ripping of canine teeth....
enjoyed
_________ice
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7 posted 2004-03-04 08:57 AM


this is wonderful Phil~  such vivid images....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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8 posted 2004-03-04 09:50 AM


Phil, this is awesome. I am sitting here looking at the cover of a book on wolves - and your writing should be there along with the picture!! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-03-04 09:54 AM


Goldenrose,
All the symbols hold, enjoyed.



icebox
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10 posted 2004-03-04 05:18 PM


Very romantic stuff; well done!
Suetang
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11 posted 2004-03-04 08:20 PM


Wow, Phil!

You are forever the romantic and your words were simply exquisite.

"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2004-03-05 05:34 AM


Margerhita....fine words..thank you..

GR.

Ice... glad you enjoyed...thank you..

GR.

Greeneyes....Thank you so much...very kind...

GR.

Chris..any way i can be associated with wolves i am happy..thank you..

GR.

Seymour..thank you very much...

GR.

Icebox...Thank you for your kind words..

GR.

Sue...thank you SO much for your very kind words...much appreciated...

GR.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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