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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-03-03 10:34 AM


I wish for the forever
the one to make our time together last,
to say all those unsaid words
of moments past.

I wish to hold your hand,
look eye to eye your brown, mine hazel
to wonder why
others say we look alike
when really we are so different on the outside.

Maybe they see more than we do...
and as the time nears
I fear that I won't be the staunch "holdup",
the one to keep it together for us
by laughing at jokes that don't really
seem so funny to me now.

Stuck here in my moment,
I think too much, about yesterday,
and tomorrow...today not even in mind.

I see the warmth in the air and the sun
touching my soul, energy trying
to seep into my skin
and my heart wishing for a touch of same.

I wish for the forever
and someone to share it.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-03-03 10:51 AM


Maureen~
So very tenderly from your heart~
Touching this lady ... yes~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-03-03 11:27 AM


me to, honey, me to....a beautiful flower of words...
passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-03-03 12:55 PM


"Stuck here in my moment,
I think too much, about yesterday,
and tomorrow...today not even in mind."

yeah, I know how that is...

hugs to you lady

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2004-03-04 01:02 AM


Time goes by so slowly, and love seems so elusive when we are stuck in a moment.

It's hard holding on while trying to let go.

As always, you write with such deep feelings.
Love and hugs Maur~


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5 posted 2004-03-04 01:08 AM


And this, I think, is what we all are seeking, one way or another.  Another great one, Wynter.   ......jo
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
6 posted 2004-03-04 05:00 AM




your words always touch me, leaving me wanting better times for you
i know it will come, just keep true to the wish

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7 posted 2004-03-04 05:49 AM


Even though this is quite sad..it still has hope...you never lose sight of your goals..and you are always ready to face another day....you must be comended for that Maureen...

Thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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