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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-03-03 08:44 AM


Forbidden


You are forbidden to me, now.
This tickle in my throat, a reminder
how something so good, can taste bitter
and leave me with an irritation
that constantly needs clearing.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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suthern
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1 posted 2004-03-03 08:49 AM


That's it exactly. *S* I know the feeling well... just didn't know how to describe it. *S*
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2004-03-03 08:50 AM


ahem * cough cough *

thanks,
M

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2004-03-03 09:58 AM


Oh yes...spit it out and flush it down the toilet!!!

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2004-03-03 10:06 AM


'vicks cough drops' could be advised...

but there is a further depth to this which can't be masked by 'cough drops and the like'...

nice write...

regards
sudhir

Kicking Kim
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5 posted 2004-03-03 10:29 AM


Wonderful write.  I think you reminded us all of something similar which too had happened to us.  Sometimes if the heart cannot let go, then the mind has to forbid it.  I don't know the mechanics of it but its true!!  

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Marsha
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6 posted 2004-03-03 06:09 PM


Little Mo you’ve hit the nail on the head, you have such an ability to write, and this is perfect.

Only you could describe it just like this, and its so accurate. You know I love this don’t you?

Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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On A Journey To The Unknown
7 posted 2004-03-03 06:34 PM


Awww Maureen, I do hope you feel better, soon.
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