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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-03-03 08:41 AM


Sunrise

As morning dawns
Come kiss me.
While dew drops glisten
Come let me hold you.
As day begins
Let us start...again.

believe in what your heart feels...

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suthern
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1 posted 2004-03-03 08:52 AM


Oh, yes... *S* I love this! *S*
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2 posted 2004-03-03 08:53 AM


Each new day is like a fresh page, to be written on, and kept in mind for future reflection!

lovely read.

^*Kimberley*^

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3 posted 2004-03-03 09:02 AM


Desire at its finest! lovely way to start any day....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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4 posted 2004-03-03 09:32 AM



Always a reason to start a day fresh...
smiling at this, Scorpio, thank you!

choshi
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5 posted 2004-03-03 09:46 AM


As morning dawns
Come kiss me.
While dew drops glisten
Come let me hold you.
As day begins
Let us start...again.


Beautiful! Vivid!  heartfelt! Inspiring!


Mourning morning,
the sun has barely risen
bright on the dew drops
how soon they fade away;
let's not waste a moment!

~P



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6 posted 2004-03-03 11:44 AM


Extremely positive....wonderful write
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7 posted 2004-03-03 12:30 PM



Beautiful words of love Scorpio..
Thank you for the inspire.


When the sun sets this evening
Please come kiss me ~
As the stars fill the heavens
Will you hold me? ~
And as this day ends..
Yes, let us love....again.


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

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8 posted 2004-03-03 01:37 PM


Ummm...yes..what my sister said!
Well done! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet



    

scorpio
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9 posted 2004-03-03 02:44 PM


Thank you Suthern.  Glad you liked it.

Kim, I appreciate your support.  Thanks.

And desire is a good thing, Lauren.  Thank you.

Karilea, one of the best reasons and ways to start any day.  Thank you.

Lee, thank you for your positive remarks.  

Glad this provided some inspiration to you, Paul.  Thank you for stopping in.

Sweet tinker.  I'm honoured that this simple write would inspire such a beautiful response from you. Thank you!!

Thank you Chris.  Most kind of you to comment.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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10 posted 2004-03-03 03:37 PM


Scorpio~
Soooooooo delicately soft~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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11 posted 2004-03-03 05:38 PM


Scorpio -- I like the way you laid this out, giving it a very nice flow -- just lovely!   .......jo
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12 posted 2004-03-03 08:17 PM


softly sexy
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13 posted 2004-03-03 08:21 PM


a beautiful write!
scorpio
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14 posted 2004-03-03 10:19 PM


Thank you,Marge.  Soft does work best.

Iliana, thank your your comment.  I'm glad you liked this.

Muted, thank you for your support. I appreciate your reply.

Thank you Midnightsun.  Your support is very much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

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15 posted 2004-03-04 09:42 AM


The perfect new beginning.
Uplifting and beautiful.
Love, Margherita

scorpio
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16 posted 2004-03-04 09:52 AM


Thank you Margherita.  Your kind words were appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

choshi
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17 posted 2004-03-04 05:03 PM


"Glad this provided some inspiration to you, Paul.  Thank you for stopping in."

Oh yes, ~S your poem certainly did inspire...I thank you...~P

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18 posted 2004-03-04 07:23 PM


That this humble write would inspire you indeed pleases me, Paul.

believe in what your heart feels...

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19 posted 2004-03-04 07:23 PM


enjoyed
scorpio
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20 posted 2004-03-04 07:27 PM


Thank you Vandana.  Much appreciate your support.

believe in what your heart feels...

Martie
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21 posted 2004-03-04 07:57 PM


scorpio

What a great way to look at time!

scorpio
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22 posted 2004-03-04 09:32 PM


Martie, yes it is a great way to spend time too.  Thank you.

believe in what your heart feels...

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23 posted 2004-03-04 11:49 PM


Nice writing...James
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24 posted 2004-03-05 01:11 AM


what a remarkable commemoration of hope...very nice
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25 posted 2004-03-05 01:25 AM


Sweet writing
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26 posted 2004-03-05 01:31 AM


if i could wake this way every morning...i would get up to the alarm instead of hitting the snooze button...beautiful...just beautiful...helen
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27 posted 2004-03-05 03:48 AM


this is precious
scorpio
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28 posted 2004-03-05 08:43 AM


Thank you James. Your kind support is appreciated.

Steven, I'm glad you liked this.

I appreciate your comments Aujussy Wolf. Thank you.

Helen, who needs an alarm clock??  Thank you.

Very kind of you to say so, Passing Shadows.  Much appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

choshi
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29 posted 2004-03-07 12:28 PM


"That this humble write would inspire you indeed pleases me, Paul."

Well then, ~S, that makes two of us.... ~P

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