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choshi
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0 posted 2004-03-03 08:18 AM



Your inviting smile,
eyes wide open lighting up,
hearts beat faster--
clouds overhead disperse,
caught in the wind's soft rhythms.


© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-03 08:20 AM


choshi
A delight to read.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-03-03 08:38 AM


beautiful, happy and passionate
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-03-03 08:49 AM


~smiles~ and eyes can say so much

*s
M

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4 posted 2004-03-03 08:50 AM


And how I yearn to see certain smiling eyes. *S* I like this very much, choshi... well written! *S*
Kicking Kim
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5 posted 2004-03-03 08:50 AM


What a lovely read. Wonderful little poem!!

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-03-03 09:20 AM


How lovely!
Very much enjoyed this little gem.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

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7 posted 2004-03-03 08:33 PM


oh, so good when you are around...
always miss you in the absence

smiling, is a wonderful way of breaking ice, storms, and hiatus!!
beautiful, Paul, very "you"!

Sunshine
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8 posted 2004-03-03 08:36 PM


Choshi...for several friends, I will send this to them.  Thank you for such a lovely poem.
iliana
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9 posted 2004-03-03 09:30 PM


Ummmmmm -- nice, Choshi!   ......jo
scorpio
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10 posted 2004-03-03 10:36 PM


I love the flow of this, Paul.  Well done.

believe in what your heart feels...

choshi
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11 posted 2004-03-07 12:48 PM


Thank you everyone, I have been so slow to respond as I was dwon with a fever .... Your comments are so kind and inspiring... ~P
choshi
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12 posted 2004-03-07 12:52 PM


oh, so good when you are around...
always miss you in the absence

smiling, is a wonderful way of breaking ice, storms, and hiatus!!
beautiful, Paul, very "you"!

Thank you Dawn, I missed very much being around....

choshi
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13 posted 2004-03-07 12:54 PM


Scorpio: "I love the flow of this, Paul.  Well done."

Thank you so much, and I see you are quite the hand with Tanka...   ~P

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2004-03-08 06:14 PM


Smiles are nice...James
Enchantress
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15 posted 2004-03-08 06:18 PM




One more time!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!


choshi
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16 posted 2004-03-08 09:25 PM


Smiles are nice...James

U bet...

choshi
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17 posted 2004-03-08 09:27 PM


One more time!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Awww, you are sweet Nancy, Thank you

~P

BluesSerenade
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18 posted 2004-03-11 01:13 AM


Wonderful rhythm, and a warm smile to go with it.

Doesn't get much better~
Much enjoyed choshi~



choshi
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19 posted 2004-03-11 01:54 AM


Doesn't get much better~
Much enjoyed choshi~


Thank you Blue, ~P

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20 posted 2004-03-11 03:31 AM


a lovely tribute
choshi
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21 posted 2004-03-11 06:48 AM


a lovely tribute

Thank you Dixie...... ~P

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