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choshi
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0 posted 2004-03-03 08:17 AM


Is that for me,
or the sun in your eyes?
Such a glowing smile--
as we draw closer;
as the night begins to fall.



© Copyright 2004 Paul C. Cooper - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-03-03 08:39 AM


another lovely!  Enjoyed
suthern
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2 posted 2004-03-03 08:51 AM


I hope it's not the sun. *S* Beautiful write! *S*
Kicking Kim
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3 posted 2004-03-03 08:52 AM


There you go again.  Your happy little thoughts keep tantalising my mind!!  Well done.

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-03-03 09:07 AM


Paul~

beautiful....

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-03-03 09:23 AM


Mmmmm...love that smile!
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

muted
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6 posted 2004-03-03 08:42 PM


Is that for me,
or the sun in your eyes?
Such a glowing smile--
as we draw closer;
as the night begins to fall.
```````````````````````````
As we share
the warmth of tangled twilight
wrapped in smiles of sunlight
betwixt the sheets of night
as our hearts begin to fall.

another pretty place to be

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-03-03 08:48 PM


Is that for me
or the sun in your eyes?

~*~

for if it be the sun
then revel in her warmth
and if it be for me
then be ready
to smile
more often...

~*~

You are an inspiration....

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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8 posted 2004-03-03 09:30 PM


UMMMMM!  Music!  Lovely!
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
9 posted 2004-03-04 06:55 AM


the haze of
the transition
sprinking us
in its splendor
the setting sun
between our eyes

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