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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-03-03 06:51 AM



If …


I sit alone
listening to
the softness drip
watching light
trickle and stir
into the silent
black morning
and wonder if …



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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-03-03 09:48 AM


I couldn't have  written it any better...

hugs
M

choshi
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since 2004-01-01
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New York
2 posted 2004-03-03 09:52 AM


Yes!!!
Kicking Kim
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Cloud Cucko Land!
3 posted 2004-03-03 09:58 AM


Completely blew me away with this one.  You have such a way with words, and I love the way that you think.  Another amazing read from you!!

*hugs*

^*Kimberley*^

"Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression"

icebox
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in the shadows
4 posted 2004-03-03 06:05 PM


Wonderful!
Krawdad
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5 posted 2004-03-03 06:07 PM


my, how you see things . . .
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