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Prism of Seven

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misao
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0 posted 03-02-2004 05:37 PM       View Profile for misao   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for misao

The radiant glare of the sun
blinds my eyes through a prism
seven colors reflect on my face
each one having a differnt strength
when the prism is put within light
colors dance and twirl round and round
by slowly rotating it with your hand
rainbows are created
what a beautiful sight
the colors meld to form a shape
a sphere, a cone, a pyramid?
which one would you recommend?
each color represents something
which one could you be?
if you love blue
you are courageous
if you love red
you are strong
they dance on the wall and in the sky
on clouds they waltz
on starts they reflect
passing windows they peak in
to shine through and pass again
pulled out of light
colors return to their home
the prism is at rest
colors locked away inside
until the sun has risen again
© Copyright 2004 Ms Kitsune - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 03-02-2004 06:37 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I love the visuals of this very much, and you captured a quality of wonder and meditative (dare I say it?) I do--serenity in the tone.



You are finding your own style and I'm loving watching you grow in the arts.

(love, mom, heh heh)

(running out of here, folks, before she clobbers me! *chuckle*)
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2 posted 03-02-2004 08:09 PM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

this shines

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3 posted 03-04-2004 02:06 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Misao?

I still maintain that this is one of your best.

Now allow me to be your mom (because I'm not about to stop that anyhow) but I wanted to tell you that just because this one didn't get a lot of replies doesn't mean it's not good, okay?

You just keep writing for your own satisfaction. You're already way ahead of me.

Startime55
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4 posted 03-04-2004 02:08 PM       View Profile for Startime55   Email Startime55   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Startime55

AHHHH!!! the colors are beautiful and your words bring to life...
Sunshine
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5 posted 03-04-2004 02:27 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

if you love blue
you are courageous
if you love red
you are strong

~*~

what does it mean
to love green?
Inquiring minds
want to know!

Very nice!
vlraynes
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6 posted 03-04-2004 05:13 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Misao?... I thoroughly enjoyed this...

These lines?...

"what a beautiful sight
the colors meld to form a shape
a sphere, a cone, a pyramid?
which one would you recommend?
each color represents something
which one could you be?"

I love that you made the colors 'mine' to
do with as I wish... You brought me into the
poem...or the poem into me... or perhaps just
a natural melding of the two... smile

and this?...

"they dance on the wall and in the sky
on clouds they waltz
on starts they reflect
passing windows they peak in
to shine through and pass again"

Just beautiful...you made me SEE the colors...
Thank you for that...

I am truly enjoying your writing and will
definitely be looking for more...  

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix
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7 posted 09-23-2013 01:16 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Yup - listen to her - just keep writing!  You have the knack and you came by it honestly that is for sure.  ♥
 
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