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Muys
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0 posted 2004-03-02 02:23 PM


And I love You
see translation below

Ik wist je ging me verlaten
Je dagen waren geteld,
Ik kon het niet geloven
maar 't vonnis was geveld.
Stil  zat ik aan je bed,
overweldigd door verdriet
I  love you ,I love you mijn liefste .
Blijf bij me ,verlaat me niet.
Ik kuste en ik streelde je
ik moest je laten gaan
Geen woord kwam over je lippen
Je keek me niet eens aan
.
Maar plotseling  kwam je overeind
en schreeuwde me toen toe.
Ik zal ze nooit vergeten,
maar je  riep ----And I love You
Daar na ben je gestorven
met de kinderen om je heen
Als ik aan die momenten denk
Voel ik me nooit alleen..

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I knew you was going to leave me
Your days were counted for
I couldn't believe it
But your judgement had been passed
In silence I sat beside your bed
Overwhelmed by grieve
I love you, I love you my darling
Stay with me, don't leave me
I kissed you and caressed you
I had to let you go
No word came across your lips
You didn't even look at me

But all of a sudden you rose
And you called out to me.
I'll never forget
when you shouted -----And I love You
Then you passed away
All the children were gathered around
When I think of these moments
I never feel alone


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Translated by Titia




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[This message has been edited by Muys (03-02-2004 03:29 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-03-02 02:28 PM



What a beautiful love story...
thank you, Mummy Muys, for sharing...
and thank you, Titia, for the translation!

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2 posted 2004-03-02 02:29 PM


ah..yes a love story indeed..
well told!


KoKo
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3 posted 2004-03-02 02:33 PM


Sweet, and beautiful. Such love...
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4 posted 2004-03-02 03:01 PM


MuysYouSweetAdorableLady~

I felt the tenderness in this~
Thank you so very much for sharing~

I love you too !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-03-02 03:04 PM


Ah Muys..this is such a sweet love story!
And, thank you Titia for the translation.
Hugs to you both~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

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6 posted 2004-03-02 03:15 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, dear Muys... what precious words to be the last on his lips. *S*
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7 posted 2004-03-02 04:03 PM




(big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, this love story is sooooooo beautiful, it made me cry knowing of your gentle heart and may you and your loved ones forever be blessed by the grace of this gorgeous song! (kiss on cheek) Yay, I'm so happy you're back, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Muys, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2004-03-02 06:05 PM



And I love you too mommy Muys, you wrote a beautiful poem about your love for Daddy.
I know he loved you very much.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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9 posted 2004-03-03 12:37 PM


It's a very haunting story, mama Muys. I can picture it happening...such an experience! Thank you so much for sharing part of your life with us
Kahlil
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10 posted 2004-03-03 02:03 AM


Thanks for sharing this beautiful love story from your life.  ~K~
Muys
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11 posted 2004-03-04 06:15 AM


Thank You my dear Friends,
I am so glad,that I can tell you my memories.
And my darling daughter Titia she is indispensable for me the ~~*Angel*~~.
And so are you my friends.
Muys

[This message has been edited by Muys (03-05-2004 02:54 PM).]

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