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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-03-02 11:32 AM


Authentically Rich

Centrifuge thoughts where languages and desires meet
A part of tone only mothers know and speak
Where breathe restores confidence and never forgets
Intense blues flying waves communicate 'I do' to weather

Nothing begins or ends here, where a contralto beautifully
Renders precisely, the way your fingers found the threshold
In the nap of places awakening to a bouquet of sunlight
As Gabriella’s soft wings influences musical paintings, adorning rainbows.

Seasons expressed vocal by warm milk and untroubled brows.
My fingers learned promises and an innovative way of thinking
Floating, dreaming, musings into delicate embers of completion
Holding tightly to these resources of dazzling spheres, trickling fusion

Lingering in soothe karma of life, inhaling space, visual essence clusters
To redemption most eloquent, liken to a viable child’s prayer
Folding hands navigating function, perhaps harsh at times
Yet, to thrive & caress fostering spring, far beyond where we vision stars

Eagerly awaiting, to bloom, incessantly coloring our mind's eye
Stretching to a dimension of the soul being dissimilar to the wry
Where voices carry sensuously, inaudible whispers, only we can hear
Special moments we love, transported authentically within some intensity of spirit

Melding infinity…endlessness, to which we converge, white heat
Burning cheeks, integrating with every past mystery, present and future dream
Rewriting one another from the warmth of transformation
Living for the way we make each other feel, beyond life

Into a dimension of worlds where we can fly
We roam the meadows of eagerness, singing into delirium
You know this maturity, this inferno, this raison d'être overtone intimately.
The flowing veins of light, there we inhabit each other forever

Where our charming passionate melodies are borrowed from Mother Nature
A place granted from the Gods, the breathe of dawn, significant embryo of love
Where no words could begin or end, just a soft vibrant silence, understanding because


this was written a long long time ago...




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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-03-02 11:45 AM


Eagerly awaiting, to bloom, incessantly coloring our mind's eye
Stretching to a dimension of the soul being dissimilar to the wry
Where voices carry sensuously, inaudible whispers, only we can hear
Special moments we love, transported authentically within some intensity of spirit

Melding infinity…endlessness, to which we converge, white heat
Burning cheeks, integrating with every past mystery, present and future dream
Rewriting one another from the warmth of transformation
Living for the way we make each other feel, beyond life


Wonderful write and I especially love the above lines.

Nice that you unburied this poem, it so deserves our attention!

Love, Margherita

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-22 01:14 PM


Lots of great work here!
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-03-22 02:34 PM


Lee

spinning thoughts fighting for understanding in a rich colourful mix of passion, heat and emotion and failure that frightens for an understanding of how a child will become an adult.

Uttering an image mixed with song that sings the vision of what may happen as the sun drifts dreaming on a shaded child's head smiling, full and happy and nappy changed

Dave

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