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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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If I could ... breathe you near deep to soul end this fear lost to you and now found I would be saved and sound If I could ... safely feast rest in arms of this beast I would live with each breath close to you far from death If I could ... love you more then I would rest for sure One's outlook can be another's expression. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love your essential words. This is very beautiful and very touching too! Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
If I could ... safely feast rest in arms of this beast I loved the use of this! Finding the beauty in the Beast...tremendous Once a long time ago, wrote a poem about New York, a city so dearly loved...and called it the Beast. Good write |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this is MORE than nice |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very touching & beautiful write Craig. Enjoyed much. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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