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mara marti
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since 2003-06-15
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0 posted 2004-03-01 10:32 PM



Burn,
let your hurting fade away

Burn,
please tell me that you'll stay

Burn,
the hate you feel is all inside

Burn,
till your heart runs dry

Burn,
let the angels see your face

Burn,
tell God of your disgrace

Burn,
let the hours pass you by

Burn,
don't you ask when or why

Burn,
until there's nothing left to loose

Burn,
death is the first thing I choose

Burn,
let the smoke rise into the air

Burn,
take the pain, don't say it's not fair

Burn,
tell them who you are

Burn,
they should know faith is not far.


© Copyright 2004 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-02 08:51 AM


A very strong poem, Mara.  
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2 posted 2004-03-02 09:09 AM


Powerful write Marilyn!
Extremely well written.
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2004-03-02 09:25 AM


very well written!
enjoyed...

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands.

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