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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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One Day I walked upon the beach one day To kick the sand and watch the spray To feel the wind upon my face Just to be another place I listened to the gulls cry by Heard the waters wave of sigh Watched the clouds turn red and gold Felt to be a million years old It gathered me into its lace Held me in its soft embrace Wooed me with its lullaby Until a tear formed in my eye And then the wet fell down my cheek An agony of tears of leek And washed me in a rain of cure A momentary sense of pure I raised my arms unto the blue And whispered to the wind, thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It gathered me into its lace Held me in its soft embrace Wooed me with its lullaby Until a tear formed in my eye And then the wet fell down my cheek An agony of tears of leek And washed me in a rain of cure A momentary sense of pure I raised my arms unto the blue And whispered to the wind, thank you ~*~ Your senses, and sensitivities...do bring tears...of gratitude.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I raised my arms unto the blue And whispered to the wind, thank you ================================= AMEN ... AMEN ... thank you for the morning stroll on your beaches of understand, me sweet Sybabers.  *ww*   Through the water ... through the rain ... to the soul of everything Wash my heart out on the stones ... and I'm almost gone. David Gray |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The next time I walk the beach I will say "thank you" and I'll remember this poem Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And then the wet fell down my cheek An agony of tears of leek And washed me in a rain of cure A momentary sense of pure I raised my arms unto the blue And whispered to the wind, thank you" Thank you for this full of thanks write today Sy. This is absolutely beautiful and inspiring. ~Smiles, hugs..and oh yes, tea, Nancy~
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Oh, this is my absolute favorite one of yours!!! I'm a total beach bum, and that is where I make my connection to all. I'll be at the beach in my mind all day now, thanks! Keeping this... ~K~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
WE need those times now and then Sy...thank you for writing and sharing... R&R is a good thing...smiles and hugs And a very good top of the morning to ya to kind sir.... Hugs Lee J. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I listened to the gulls cry by Heard the waters wave of sigh Watched the clouds turn red and gold Felt to be a million years old ah been there with that feeling.. nicely done Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...makes me remember a few times ...in a place like that |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, this was one of my favorites. It is very melodic and I really, really like the conclusion, as well as: "It gathered me into its lace Held me in its soft embrace Wooed me with its lullaby Until a tear formed in my eye"  ......jo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ehhh, you're just too good at this. (Never stop m'friend) |
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