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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2004-03-02 02:02 AM


Moonbeams dance and play in night’s far distant sky,
free again from bondage or once again alive,
but the sun unaware has disappeared somewhere  
and sleeps until awoken to the reality of life.    

Dictated to by need sun meets the passing moon
and a passionate encounter ceases all too soon
but the sun is energized and forced to inculcate  
the power of the moon’s deep emotive mood.    

Through a once hard and solid tough veneer  
love grows and sets itself into the atmosphere  
and hovers on the outskirts of new territories      
like a woman’s tears on the edge of knowing fear.

Energy released burns anguish into peace
but the center-piece of love remains a masterpiece!  

Helen / 2 March 2004


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-03-02 02:16 AM


enjoyed this

very good

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2004-03-02 06:15 AM


Thanks passing shadows for the read and your kind comment.
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3 posted 2004-03-02 06:25 PM


oh, i like this..


Martie
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4 posted 2004-03-02 06:55 PM


Helen

Beautiful, as always!

Goodknight
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5 posted 2004-03-02 09:14 PM


I like this a lot - so well done - thanks - Paul
Honeybunch
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6 posted 2004-03-02 09:45 PM


And thank you all so much for reading!
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7 posted 2004-03-02 10:09 PM




(big angel hugs) Such beauty fills your words, sweet friend, peace indeed sings in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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8 posted 2004-03-03 06:08 PM


I really like your work!  Thank you for sharing it with us.
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9 posted 2004-03-04 01:14 AM


And in the end.....

Energy released burns anguish into peace
but the center-piece of love remains a masterpiece!

Your writing is all that,  my dear Helen~



iliana
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10 posted 2004-03-04 01:20 AM


Helen, I really liked your perspective here!  Beautiful picture.   ....jo
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