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Beneath Your Touch
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Beneath Your Touch |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Swift the coming of fathoms Chance the only dictate braced against the tide A wilderness unconquered and unfinished Sleek and brilliant Shining on my skin an imprint of you Familiar and welcome part of me Stroke of migrating warm Flow along the channels of desire Lifting upright the surfaces of pink and blush Opening lines loosening verbs Sudden in the mystique we glaze An endless beginning to an uncharted sea Copyright Kkh 4/7/04 |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
spectacular writing diamond ...the whole poem goes together well : ) JW |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD, I loved this one -- it leaves me breathless. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always write beautifully |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sleek and brilliant Shining on my skin an imprint of you Familiar and welcome part of me I like! This is sleek and brilliant! Sadie |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is beautiful and it sizzles! ~K~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Very well written and interesting to read. I enjoyed the 3-line stanza technigue. |
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