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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-03-01 01:45 PM


Sage

Sage tenderly emits a voice singing to the ears of earth
Market place of countenance blowing vigor’s gaily berth
Anchoring magnetic harmony to the listener’s sponging core
Of wind, or’r land & seas, life’s womb tumbling ever forth

Undertones of languid seasons, contain breathless patient years
Fires spreading wild beams, mutual Carnegie premieres
Full circled glowing home, welcomes musical flakes so poignant
Where heaven details many stars, melodious plumes utterly fragrant

Loving waves, cloistered nostalgic, ripens refuge in this nest
Eye of soul, world of ecstasy, spurts golden ingots at it’s best
To fill and refill goblet’s brainchild, cavalcades our springtime verse
We gulp, as if our heart’s could think, sweet flocks and whirling herds

Therefore, deep within each and every gracious human soul
Swarms the artist of life, seeding wisdom’s secret goals
Because we are the doers of our own eternal dreams
By all men’s faith in human creativity


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-03-01 03:10 PM


LeeJ
Now that would be nice. Well done.

Juju
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2 posted 2004-03-01 05:27 PM


That was a really nice poem.
Made me happy.\


_Juju

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3 posted 2004-03-02 03:26 AM


you are right
and this is a beautiful flow of words that make a strong point

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4 posted 2004-03-02 01:03 PM


LeeJ,
   This was a toughy!  I wanted so much to comment on this by copying a verse, but when I re-read it, it was impossible to choose just one to copy!  This is such a lovely and positive piece of work with such an inviting message!  Thanking you,
                 Sadie

iliana
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5 posted 2004-03-02 01:06 PM


Lee -- this was truly an important message and beautifully written.  
"Therefore, deep within each and every gracious human soul
Swarms the artist of life, seeding wisdom’s secret goals
Because we are the doers of our own eternal dreams
By all men’s faith in human creativity"

Amen, to that!

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