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lucky
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0 posted 2004-03-01 11:44 AM



drink ye of the liquid song from
p
oet’s flute divine sing and let the
w
eaving notes flow through your
b
raided rhyme yet do not
d
are or e’er forget we
s
tand on sacred
g
rounds
c
ome
write
your
song
& sing
along and
brave the dare
around but
mind
ye
well
forbidden
fruits who found on
Irish vines think the glaze of
moonlit wine goes best with Celtic rhyme


So... does it look like a flute..?





Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2004 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-03-01 01:08 PM


BRAVO, an excellent write honoring a fantastic poet! Loved the presentation, Dale.
Martie
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2 posted 2004-03-01 02:37 PM


Dale....she is a beautiful poet, for sure...much deserving of this lovely tribute!


Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-03-01 03:36 PM


A beautiful tribute for a beautiful poet

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2004-03-01 04:14 PM


lucky,
It not only looks like a flute, but it sounds like one. I'm sure Liz will be honored.
Doc

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5 posted 2004-03-01 04:22 PM


A beautiful tribute to a beautiful lady!
Wonderful presentation!!  Very much enjoyed!
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

lucky
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6 posted 2004-03-01 10:26 PM


I wanted to thank you all so much.
the art is a snap as I've developed
it over time. I've got to where I do it
all on the left hand border and know
right where it's going to fall when I
center it... Now the poem on the other
hand took more time than most of my
writes as I played around with moving
words for mush to long. Never the less
a lot of fun.

Enchantress... what a  surprise to see
you.. Or was it Doc that brought you
along. Nice to see you both... I'm
honered.

And sweet Martie you keep me ever
pushing onward.

And the rest of you I thank you so much
my best to you all.

best friends best finds,
dale

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


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7 posted 2004-03-02 03:15 AM


youve left a smile on my face

this tribute is so lovely, she and you both seem to cherish this wine of poetic friendship....

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-03-02 04:54 AM


I'm in awe
Sunshine
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9 posted 2004-03-02 06:33 AM



I've always enjoyed both phases of your art, Lucky...and when you place your words down in such lines for a tribute so befitting Elizabeth, all I can say is

Thank you.

lucky
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10 posted 2004-03-02 01:41 PM


Another thank-you for Muted

And Dixie your poping up all the time
nice to see you. I got a kick out of that
foot on the banana quip.

And Sunshine Now this is an real
surprise, I guess I'm still a little old
fashoned saying thank-you to you
all (something my mother taught me)

My Best to you all, Dale


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