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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-03-01 08:30 AM


Beacon of morning
     awakens with urgency
Time defiantly proceeds,
     detonating a narrative
As each moment archives
Entering thoughtful promise
      into man’s mind
Feelings and impressions
     warmly surpassing yesterday
Well-mannered nature’s
     suspending observances

Enabling the infancy of morning,
      prosperity to learn
Fountains of energy,
      pouring daily earnings
Its own fleshy surplus,
     morning’s mystical patience
Forming relationships,
     paramount encounters of living beings
Atoms encouraging reformation
     of expressional meaning

Source of current day
     Conscience selections vibrating colors
to love with no apprehension
     Interacting as if conceiving a child
Which is entirely based on absolute design?
     I’ve inherited romance…a great intimate vine
As it is now, inborn to mankind


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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2004-03-01 09:18 AM


As usual Lee..brilliant poetry..words that tumble off the tongue and come alive the moment they are spoken.....

Thank you....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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2 posted 2004-03-01 10:01 AM


Lee~

'Enabling the infancy of morning'

Oh, oh ... yes ...~
Such lovely poetic truths find their way into your inking well ... and then you splash them our way~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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steavenr
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3 posted 2004-03-01 06:36 PM


I loved the cadence of this...and I especially loved the following lines:

"detonating a narrative
As each moment archives"

such exquisite imagery

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