Open Poetry #31 |
Governess |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beacon of morning awakens with urgency Time defiantly proceeds, detonating a narrative As each moment archives Entering thoughtful promise into man’s mind Feelings and impressions warmly surpassing yesterday Well-mannered nature’s suspending observances Enabling the infancy of morning, prosperity to learn Fountains of energy, pouring daily earnings Its own fleshy surplus, morning’s mystical patience Forming relationships, paramount encounters of living beings Atoms encouraging reformation of expressional meaning Source of current day Conscience selections vibrating colors to love with no apprehension Interacting as if conceiving a child Which is entirely based on absolute design? I’ve inherited romance…a great intimate vine As it is now, inborn to mankind |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
As usual Lee..brilliant poetry..words that tumble off the tongue and come alive the moment they are spoken..... Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'Enabling the infancy of morning' Oh, oh ... yes ...~ Such lovely poetic truths find their way into your inking well ... and then you splash them our way~ Thank you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I loved the cadence of this...and I especially loved the following lines: "detonating a narrative As each moment archives" such exquisite imagery |
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