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Conundrum?
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Conundrum? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Conundrum? truth a point claimed by life’s conclusions made experiences played out in real time’s frame deluded or concluded by eyes tainted, strained, or inflamed with passion, delusion or pain’s stain too heart embedded or brain emblazoned to discount as opinion without probing, investigating, aligning with Word and Light. ©February 29, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
excellent progression and conclusion, not to mention the great word choices |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...you've got me thinking... Love how this is worded, how do you do it??? ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Vas I like the way this poem stretches out as it progresses...the form goes very well with the theme..the content is brief, but in that brevity lies the answer to the title, which is actualy a question....very good, enjoyed the read _____ice ><> btw I did spell the word wrong in my poem about the road killed frogs,, it should have been "they've" I have edited it to be so, thanks for pointing that out in your comment ice |
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