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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-02-29 09:15 PM



I play the solitaire game now and then
so when it is against me
I know I must write….

And when it is with me, I stay away from writing
For luck is most certainly not on my side
In finding the right words
For the write of now…

For I have substituted
“if you’re winning, unlucky in love…”

~*~

I check horoscopes
Now and then, following who it is
A sign of my life is following…
And who it is not…

And I see the edge to believing in that…

~*~

I use to fold diapers just so
and still and now fold sheets, then towels
Just like this…giving the most
To the least space;

For some things can’t be broken
Before they’re fixed…

~*~

And sometimes I write of elephants
and rooms, and teacups and leaves…
something to believe in
and something to live with…

~*~

So if there is no understanding
to the above,
go ahead and smile…

I am.

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-02-29 09:22 PM


"And sometimes I write of elephants
and rooms, and teacups and leaves…
something to believe in
and something to live with…

~*~

So if there is no understanding
to the above,
go ahead and smile…

I am."


I smile..as there is understanding.
Love ya lady~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-02-29 09:36 PM



I check horoscopes
Now and then, following who it is
A sign of my life is following…
And who it is not…

Hey I could relate to this part above , this is what I do too!!!
Hope

Grover
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3 posted 2004-02-29 09:54 PM


Enjoyed! Grover.
EternitysHorizon
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Twilight's Orchestra
4 posted 2004-02-29 10:20 PM


Why tis surely
all a game
but only
semantically speaking

Where rainbow touches earth gentlest
glow twilight abounding promising
the Orchestra Will Play Tonight

Martie
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5 posted 2004-02-29 10:23 PM


Karilea...Oh, I understand, and I'm smiling anyway!  
suthern
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6 posted 2004-02-29 10:32 PM


I think there'll be a lot more smiles of understanding than from not. *G* I like this reverie very much! *S*

(and if only computer solitaire games paid my winnings! LOL)

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-03-01 04:37 AM


can I smile anyway?
dingusjr
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8 posted 2004-03-01 05:16 AM


Enjoyed your insight...as always.  LARRY
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9 posted 2004-03-01 02:17 PM


*smile*
scorpio
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right...there
10 posted 2004-03-01 04:24 PM


I think I understand..and I am smiling anyway.  
Duncan
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11 posted 2004-03-01 09:00 PM


"I check horoscopes
Now and then, following who it is
A sign of my life is following…
And who it is not…

And I see the edge to believing in that…"

A bit of a curve from you Kari.  I like it...  


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