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jaicie114
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On the edge of forever

0 posted 2004-02-29 06:07 PM



This is the
voice of love...

The small whisper
that falls gently
on your ear on
a chilly winter day.

The hand that
reaches for yours
as you run through
a springtime meadow.

Taking a nap together
in a swinging hammock
on a lazy, sultry
summer afternoon.

Seeing the glint of passion
in your lover's gaze
over a smoldering
autumn campfire.

Each wonder...
Every small miracle...
Embeds itself in the
center of our soul,
and sustains us
through the storms
of our life.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

© Copyright 2004 Jaicie - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-02-29 06:27 PM


One to remember and treasure

Well written all encompassing
Reality as it is for a start

The sequal may not be for a place such as this

Dave

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
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On the edge of forever
2 posted 2004-02-29 07:45 PM


Oh, Dave...

No sequels for this one!  I don't "do" the storms very well...LOL

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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3 posted 2004-03-02 06:21 AM


Dear jaicie, you capture the voice of love beautifully and share it with your usual passion.
Such romantic visions!

Love and hugs. Margherita


steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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4 posted 2004-03-03 04:10 PM


jaicie, nice write...it portrays an uncomplicated side to a very complex emotion
Grover
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London, ON, Canada
5 posted 2004-03-03 04:15 PM


You've covered all bases on the seasonal front! Grover.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-03-03 04:21 PM


Excellent write Jaicie...very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~
            

jaicie114
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On the edge of forever
7 posted 2004-03-06 07:25 PM


Margherita, steaven, Grover, and Nancy...

Thank you all for the gracious and warm comments. They mean so much to me.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-03-08 06:13 PM


Wanting and waiting to hear it...James
jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
9 posted 2004-03-08 10:28 PM


Awwww...James...now, now. Remember...I've read your poetry!  I think you hear it lots more often than most of us!  

Thanks for the read.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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