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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2004-02-29 05:47 PM


Its kinda a rewrite of a thousand dreams i wrote for final fantasy x-2

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Shuyin memories; (A thousand dreams)

I know that your hurting now
Those tears tell all your lies
Really you needed me
But truth was hard to find.

You acted so distantly
Towards the end
Before you left pushed me aside
Spent your last moments
Running through our memories
A thousand dreams inside.

Thinking back through the ages
Wishing things had been better spoken
Instand of our hearts been taken.

Separated by a war
You left to defend me
Still I followed you
Protected you along the way.

Finally met at the ending of our dreams
Together we left never meeting on the far-plains
Wished I could see you smile once again
My arms opened wide awaiting you.

I know that someday you’ll come back to me
Someday you’ll return to me
Just holding onto memories
A thousand dreams inside.

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-03-01 01:20 PM



Before you left pushed me aside
Spent your last moments
Running through our memories
A thousand dreams inside.
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enjoyed the write, especially these lines

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-03-22 01:17 PM


Very good work!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-03-22 01:28 PM



I'm a Final Fantasy fanatic!  ~ and your poem was fantastic!

Love & Light
EA

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

4 posted 2004-03-22 02:21 PM


keep writing

Dave

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